Why We Sold an English-Speaking Course in Hinglish
What two years running user acquisition for Entri's Hindi upskilling category taught me about writing for buyers who are buying their way out of a gap — and where direct-response course selling stops scaling.
- Brand
- Entri.app
- Role
- Growth Manager (in-house)
- Period
- August 2020 – July 2022
- Market
- India, with a diaspora tail in the US, UK, Canada and UAE
The short answer
We spent months testing audience segments — housewives, office-goers, professionals — with dedicated landing pages for each. None of it moved the number much. What moved it was changing the one thing every page had in common: the language. We rewrote the funnel in Hinglish, the register the audience actually speaks in.
Over the following six months the category went from roughly ₹5L to ₹1Cr in monthly revenue, with monthly ad spend moving from about ₹1.5L to ₹30L and ROAS holding at around 3x.
Sell in the language of your buyer's current competence, not the language of their aspiration.
The situation
When I picked up the category it was doing about ₹5L a month in revenue on ₹1–2L of monthly ad spend. Most customers were in India, with a meaningful tail in the US, UK, Canada and the UAE — largely Hindi-speaking diaspora.
What we tried first: segmenting our way to nowhere
We built dedicated landing pages for distinct audiences — housewives, office-goers, people who needed professional or corporate English — and A/B tested targeting against each. The logic was standard and defensible: different people want spoken English for different reasons, so speak to each motivation separately. A homemaker rejoining the workforce and a mid-career professional preparing for client calls are not the same buyer.
The tests ran. The pages were fine. The numbers stayed roughly where they were.
What took us a while to see is that we were optimising a variable that wasn't the bottleneck. Every one of those pages, however carefully targeted, was written in polished English. We were varying the message across pages while holding constant the thing that was actually costing us conversions — the register the message arrived in.
That's the general lesson, and it's worth more than the Hinglish finding itself: when a set of well-built segment variants all underperform in the same way, stop refining the variants. The problem is almost always in what they share, not in how they differ. Segmentation is a powerful lever, but it can only redistribute demand you're already capturing. It can't fix a barrier sitting upstream of all of it.
All three underperformed the same way — which is the tell. The bottleneck sat in what the variants shared, not in how they differed.
The decision
This is less obvious than it looks in hindsight. The instinct across edtech is that an English course should present itself in polished English, because the page doubles as a proof of the product. Look how good our English is. But that logic inverts the moment you think about who is reading. Anyone confident enough in English to be persuaded by an English sales page has largely solved the problem the course exists to solve. The people who need it most are the ones for whom the page is hardest.
So the landing page had a requirement the product didn't: it had to be effortless. Every sentence a reader had to work at was a sentence in which they quietly concluded this wasn't for them.
Worth saying plainly: nobody at Entri fought this. There was no heroic internal battle. The team was aligned on running it as an experiment, and it was treated as a test rather than a bet. That mattered more than it sounds — a team that will run an experiment against its own category instinct is a structural advantage, and it's the reason the finding surfaced at all rather than dying in a review meeting.
Why it worked
A landing page for a skill-gap product isn't only an argument for the product. It's a test the reader administers to themselves. If they struggle through the copy, they've just collected evidence that they're behind — and the response to that isn't "I should buy this," it's embarrassment, then exit. If the copy is effortless, they stay in a frame where they can picture themselves succeeding, which is the frame in which people actually buy.
Hinglish did two things simultaneously: it removed the comprehension tax, and it signalled that the course was built by people who understood where the learner was starting from. The second is trust, and trust is most of what a first-time edtech buyer is deciding on.
This generalises well past language. Any product bought to close a gap — financial literacy, fitness, technical skills, career transitions — carries the same trap. The marketing gets written in the voice of the finished state rather than the starting state. It flatters people who have already arrived and quietly excludes the people who were going to buy.
The creator-content finding
I want to be careful with this one. In 2026 the finding is unremarkable — creator-led and UGC-style ads beating studio production is now a default assumption in performance marketing. It was not the default in 2020, and arguing to run a mentor's raw organic content over professionally produced creative was a real argument at the time.
I don't have the CTR and CPA deltas from that period, so I won't quote figures I can't stand behind. The directional finding is what I'd claim: content that had already earned attention organically kept earning it in paid, and content built to look like an ad performed like one.
What broke at scale
The direct landing-page purchase model hit a ceiling. Selling the course straight off the page worked beautifully at lower spend and then flattened. Past a point we weren't able to keep buying incremental purchases efficiently through pure click-to-buy campaigns — the audience willing to make an unassisted online purchase decision for a course is finite, and we exhausted it before we exhausted the market.
We had to raise the ceiling on revenue per buyer. Scaling 20x on volume alone wasn't available, so we introduced higher-ticket courses. That changes the sale: a higher price point isn't a decision most buyers make from a landing page alone.
What we landed on was a hybrid, and it's the part I'd carry into any similar account. The landing page still sold the course directly for buyers ready to transact. Alongside it, a WhatsApp button captured people who weren't — turning them into queries rather than losing them as bounces. Those conversations let us assess what the person actually needed and pitch the plan that fit, including the higher-ticket options that would never have converted cold off a page. Campaign objectives shifted accordingly, from purchase-optimised to lead generation.
The underlying pattern: direct-response course selling has a spend ceiling, and past it you scale by adding a human to the loop and raising average order value — not by pushing harder on the same funnel. The mistake I see repeatedly is teams treating a flattening direct funnel as a creative or targeting problem, and burning months optimising inside a model that has structurally run out of room.
Efficient at low spend, then flattened — the pool of buyers willing to transact unassisted ran out before the market did.
Held ~3x ROAS while spend scaled to ~₹30L/month — the assisted path raised order value and recovered demand the direct funnel was losing.
How to apply this
Six things that transfer out of this account into any similar one:
- Write the page for the person who hasn't solved the problem yet. Read your own copy as someone at the starting line, not the finish line. If it requires the competence you're selling, rewrite it.
- Pick the register your buyer thinks in, not the one your category defaults to. For much of India that means Hinglish — not English, and not formal Hindi.
- When every segment variant underperforms the same way, look at what they share. Segmentation redistributes demand you're already capturing; it can't fix a barrier upstream of all of it.
- Test the register itself, not just the message inside it. Most teams hold language constant and test headlines within it. The register is usually the bigger lever.
- Before commissioning production creative, look at what already earned attention organically. If a founder, mentor or creator attached to the product has content performing unpaid, that's your first ad — not your reference brief.
- Expect the direct funnel to cap. Plan the assisted-sale path and the higher-ticket tier before you need them, because you'll need them at roughly the point the direct funnel stops responding to optimisation.
Evidence and limits
What can be independently checked:
- Employment and tenure: Growth Manager, Entri, Aug 2020 – Jul 2022
- LinkedIn recommendation from Awal Madaan, partner at Entri
- Entri internal recognition: Best Performer (February 2021)
- Entri internal recognition: Emerging Entrepreneur (August 2020)
